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Winter Queen

Winter Queen

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From heaven little gems are snowing,
Blanketing everything in white;
The countless rainbow lights are glowing,
Mere strangers smile with delight.
These holidays, they seem so pleasant:
Under the tree a pile of presents,
No work - only a time of rest
When everything is for the best.
Unseen, the Winter Queen is reaping
Grim satisfaction from this craze,
Smirking at workers as they laze,
Content that summer's life is sleeping.
The humans think she will not harm,
And so they fall under her charm.

11.12.08
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Winter Queen December 12 9 comments 1 favourite

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Monster of the Mind There is a monster in my mind,
Its empire is truly vast
For in my memories I find
A very dark and tainted past.

It reaches through the gears of time
To pull me back into its lair,
A murky place covered in grime;
I fall into a deep despair.

"Begone with you!" I try to shout,
A faint voice lost amidst the scream.
My troubled soul is filled with doubt;
The hidden villain reigns supreme.

The days when everything was pure
Are gone! The monster, though, endures.

17.12.08Monster of the Mind by ~nikitakit
Charitable Thoughts Gently your hand tosses that penny
Not on the ground, into a box.
It would be cherished by so many

For vaccination from the pox
Or sturdy roofing overhead,
Not things of which a townsman talks.

"I'll buy a soda",—you have said,
And drank your savings to the cent
Before reclining in your bed,

With all your money wisely spent
(For had you donated, you know
only a portion would be sent);

There is much more you can bestow —
But will you ever stoop so low?

15.12.08Charitable Thoughts by ~nikitakit
Winter Queen From heaven little gems are snowing,
Blanketing everything in white;
The countless rainbow lights are glowing,
Mere strangers smile with delight.
These holidays, they seem so pleasant:
Under the tree a pile of presents,
No work - only a time of rest
When everything is for the best.
Unseen, the Winter Queen is reaping
Grim satisfaction from this craze,
Smirking at workers as they laze,
Content that summer's life is sleeping.
The humans think she will not harm,
And so they fall under her charm.

11.12.08Winter Queen by ~nikitakit
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  • Current Residence: California
  • Interests: Math, Computers, Writing poetry/fiction
  • Favourite movie: Star Wars IV-VI
  • Favourite band or musician: The Beatles
  • Favourite genre of music: Rock
  • Operating System: Ubuntu
  • Favourite game: Battle for Wesnoth

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:iconjeremyhopkins:
~jeremyhopkins Dec 16, 2008
Thanks! I appreciate the sentiment and I'm glad my work can entertain you. I like your photos and writing too!
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Mood: Wow! ~G2KSurivemors Dec 10, 2008
Thanks for the fav, Matt enjoys your taste.

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:skull:Since I have already gone way past my limit, now it's time to see how far I can reach the stars. :evillaugh:
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~nikitakit Dec 10, 2008
Sure.

Those are great images you have there (all of them).
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~Ayagami Dec 7, 2008
the faces picture you just commented on was stolen. i need some backup becuase she won't listen to me. Please help?

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"One bright day in the middle of the night, two dead boys got up to fight.
Back to back they face each other, drew their swords and shot each other.
Don't believe me that this story is true?
Then ask the blind man, he saw it too."
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~reveurpassionne Dec 6, 2008
Thanks for the favourite on 'Sunshine'~ ^^
If you have time, look at some of my other work! It's written in the same style so you might enjoy it too~
Thanks again! =]
<3

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A member of writers-club, the-literati & poetryplease ~
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:iconnikitakit:
~nikitakit Dec 7, 2008
I've looked over some of them so far... great job! I'll look at more of them once school becomes less demanding.

In the mean time, feel free to look over my poems. (Unfortunately, I don't have as many good ones as you).
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:iconreveurpassionne:
~reveurpassionne Dec 7, 2008
Thanks~ =]
*Starting looking at your poems*

...

*Jaw dropping*
Wow! I love your style! It's rhythm flows so well! ^^
The only thing that I don't like...(which is really subjective) is the fact that it's not romance~ xD Which is just my preferred genre of poetry. So I don't particularly like what you're writing about, but your writing style is amazing.
Keep at it! =]
<3

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A member of writers-club, the-literati & poetryplease ~
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~tobimashou Dec 6, 2008
Thanks for the watch!!

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他所に飛びましょう
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:iconnikitakit:
~nikitakit Dec 6, 2008
Sure! I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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*Arii-Suzuki Dec 5, 2008
Thanks for the visit!

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"Friends don't let friends eat friends"
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